小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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GOOd friend I have a good friend who have long hair ,big eyes,a small mouth.my good friend's name is ManEn. When I am in terrible maoen allowys help me .let me take examples.When maoen known I was fail the exam of math ,she told me "where there is a will,there is a way and as we all know no pain,no pain.Later,he taught me math every day. So,As far as I am concerned a friend in deed is a friend indeed.