2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Computer and Man It seems that in recent years, the number of families with computers is increasing. And computer can help people with our lives. But people's attitudes differ sharply about lying on computer. Some hold positive views. For one thing, computer can calculate much more complicated things than human and help people to find out the result of some unsolved mysteries of world science. For another thing, computer is one type of artificial intelligence. So lying on computer just means lying on ourselves. However, others are worried. They think people would lose their own abilities to think, calculate and take actions if we always use computer instead of doing things by ourselves. As far as I am concerned, it can be a win-win result. The more we use computer, the more hardworking the computer engineers are. So our usage could promote the development of science and technoligy. And we should also understand the computer just a instument to help us live better not the thing we could depend on.