小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good friend I have a good friend who she's name is Manen. She have long back hair, big eyes,a small mouth. When I am in terrible Manen allows help me. Let me take a examples when Manen know I failed the math exam.She told me "where there is a will,there is a way and as we all know no pain,no pain".later,he taught me math every day. So As far as I'm concerned a friend in deed is a friend indeed.