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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9023
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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It is obvious in the graph that people will not be cheated if they can identify products they purchase as well as services they get carefully .At the point of The Civil Servant Test Craze reveals that there are an considerable number of people providing less satisfactory services to civil due to various products made in the world with the rapid development of the world. In order to remove this disadvantages,there are several aspects we should pay attention to.To begin with ,knowing how to utilize knowledge to identify whether the service you get or the products you purchase is worth , is significant and fundamental for civil to make use of their money porperly. In addition,It is much better for civil to involve themselves into market evolution so as to facilitate their capacity for identify . It is deeply-rooted in my mind that nothing is more beneficial than identification.

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