小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I have a good friend ,her name is manen. She has long back hair,big eyes,a small mouth. Whenever I have a difficult time my friends always help me.Let me an example;I have math test failed.I very sad .She knew this thing comfort me no pain,no pain and told me not to give up.Later,she taught me math every day. So,As far as I am concerned a friend indeed is a friend indeed.