小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,her name is manen. She has long back hair,big eyes,a small mouth. Whenever I have a difficult time my friends always help me.Let me an example;I have math test failed.I am so sad .She knows this after the event .she comforted me also told me not to give up .Later,she taught me math every day. So,As far as I am concerned a friend indeed is a friend indeed.