2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；注意文中个别的句子错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

Nowadays there were more and more good goods ,they have beautiful packages,and at the same time ,they are practical.But there were also have many unsatisfing goods,one of the representative sences is over packaging. Over packaging is commen in our lives,I think there are these reasons of over packaging:firstly,manufacturers are willing to sell their goods,for goods,packaging is necessary,so they have a wrong idea:better packaging make better sales volume;secondly,customers buy goods resting with packaging,this action may facilitate over packing;thirdly,the sociaty don't clearly define the issue of over packaging. I disagree the action of over packing,I think goods'quality is more important,and overpacking would cause waste .To check over packing,I think it need manufacturers,custormers and society work together.