作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;采用了一些简单的从句。
In recent years,more and more people are keen on celebrate western holiday.such as the Christmas day .. in my opinion,their are two reasons that people celebrating western festivals.firstly,the western holiday have many features that china holidays not have. For instance ,romantic . the sake of people love the Christmas is it's romance.people are addicted in the feeling of receive a romantic gift -an apple with full of love.secondly,people like holidays,they hope to celebrate more holidays.therefore,they lead the china holidays and lead the western holidays that they like. the phenomenon produce a lot of influence .My opinions are as follows. above all,people learn more about western culture from their holidays.It's beneficial for us to communicate with foreigners and set up friendships.tn another hand ,it create some bad influence that people develops some bad thoughts ,for example some people believe what western country has is more better .the love the foreign cultures that ts too one-sided as far as i am concerned ,we are supposed to treat the phenomenon objective .learn the advantages of western country but not too optimistic and admirable.
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