回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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Dear John Smith, I am writing the purchase request for some computers are following the reason. Replace another one for me or take it back.The people I was calling couldn't hear me no matter how loudly I spoke.Please contast me at the mobile phone number 1233332,or fax number 57869.I sincerely hope that you continue to put in order in my company in the futher.I would like to say to you.Enclose please find the price list. your sincreely Wang Li capule