高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown is very dirty now.But before the ten years,my hometown is beautiful. In the past,the round of my hometown had many trees.And the gat of the town had a small river,and many fish was swimming in the river.But the house was poor.And then,the streets was narrow.What's more ,the people had to work every day.And the people's life was poor. But now,many big an tall bulliding is built in my hometown and there have many stores.Many cars is running on the strees.The industry is improving,but the enviourment become bad and bad.The number of trees is ruduceing.And the fish is disappearing. So the most important thing is that protecting enviourment.Come on!