2014高考英语作文预测集中训练10:去伦敦旅游

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。

I’m a student named Li Hua who is being trained in Oxford .When searching for some travelling information on the Internet ,an advertisement about your agency suddenly caught my eyes .Unfortunately ,I couldn't understand it accurately because its being vague in some places .So I send this e-mail to ask more details about your advertisement .And I wonder the specific fee of your agency ,including the accommodation ,bus fee and so on .Furthermore , I need to know when we leave and when we will be back .That's all .Thank you !