小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend,she's name is xiaoxiao ,she was 15 years old,i like her very much,when i have a cold ,she would take gond care of me ,how ever ,she is my good friend,we stady together.she alaway teach me something which i do not know.we alaway play together ,sometime we go swimming ,climb the montain