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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the Internet,we have more and more way of communicating.For example, we can send e-mail,it is faster than letter.And we can use qq to communicate with our family and friends.What's more,we can use Video frequency chat,it's suitable to people who study or work in the distance. Although electronic communicate is very convenient,it can't replace face-to-face contact. As far as I am concerned,face-to-face contact is more true and it's better to communicate and express our feeling.Besides,electronic communicate has demand to computer skills.A large part of old people and middle-aged persons can't use computer.

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