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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17586
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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Snap judgments can never be trusted Everyone more or less have made some snap judgments during their whole life especially when we were young.There is no exception in my life.I believe that snap judgments can never be trusted. First of all, snap judgments mean you didn't think over it very seriously which will be regretful in the future.What's more,we are always making some snap judgments in a greatly strong feeling that is more made by our heart rather than our brain which is unwise.From my point of view,we must regard every judgment careful because it would influence our life soon or late.For example when I was younger I made a snap judgment about my choice of senior high school which I still regret now even though it was past more than six years. Above all mentioned,I keep that snap judgments can never be trusted and in my thinking we must think about every judgment deeply and balance it's advantages and disadvantages.Only in this way,can we have a better life in future.

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