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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；词汇不够丰富，且文中有拼写错误；采用了一些简单的从句；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
We can know from the chart that more and more people communicate with the internet, however ,if electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact, I think it can't. first and foremost ,I think that people prefer to communicate by face-to-face ,because that is more intersting .Then,useing internet a long time is terrible for people's eyes. It is bad for our healthy. last but not least ,if people communicate by face-to-face,it is convection to express themself. In conclusion, i think that can't repalce face-to-face communication.
