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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The picture shows that the communication between parents and children is by internet.There are less and less face -to -face chances for parents and their children to communicate because of the internet. Nowadays,most people are depending on the internet but ignore the actual communication.Who should we to blame? We cannot stop the development of the science and what we should learn is to use the internet correctly.Don't let it hurt our emotion but promote ours. Firstly,as the children of our parents,we should have tried to visit our parents as much as possible.It is talks not phones or text that our parents need.Therefore,just go home rather than surf the internet.

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