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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中用词稍显贫乏;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the internet,more and more people communicate on the internet.It's of vital importance for us to use computer to communicate with each other ,which can help us beyond the bounds of space and time.But on the other hand,it also cause the family-member-loving more and more decline. From the picture,we can know the parent's are eager to communicate with their child face to face,which reveal the fact that communicating on the internet can't take the place of communicating face to face forever. As far as I'm concerned,we should use the computer properly.We can communicate on the internet,but at the same time,we shouldn't forget to communicate with people face to face.

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