2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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This datas are express that more and more money are used as Education Pays.At the same time,the unempioyment rate is not increasing.It's lead to our life keep balance,then,our life become very difficult to live.We should learning more knowedge to make us more smart and more skills. We can find that the most useful education pays is the professional degree.It's can reduse unemployment rate. So if we want to keep our pays balance and earn more money from our dairly life,we should acquire the professional degree.Try our best to use this money and learn more skills.Because of our parients take in earning with very tough. In short,We need to collect this data to make sure us can get more useful value.No pian,no gain.