2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

It turned to be an upset day after I know my grades of computer exam.Yeah,the outcome is out of my expert that I thought I will get at least 80 points. What a bad news!Is it because I was not hard enough?Or was I stupid? In fact,I do not want to be lack of confidence just owing to a fail.Only in this time I found I care it so much. At that moment,Hearing the songs of Beyond,one of my favorite singers,I am full of courage again.How to be successful and achieve my dream.It need lots of efforts that over my imagination. What's worse,I have thought lots of things these days.What I know is that there are so many bad habits I have to break down,or else it will influence all my life in the future.