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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

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要求：: Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化多样；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

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Now people use mobiles, nets,computers any time and any place,it seems that if there is no these things,they can not live.People would like snaring their mobile to talking with their family or friends. On net,people can get much information and they think they can learn and know all things on net,so they don not connect with teachers or classmates,Is it right way to get knowledge.

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