小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is very beautiful,she has big eyes and black long hair.She likes dancing and singing,I like her very much.When I have bad monition,she will laughing with me,meanwhile she takes me to eat delicious foods. She needs to exercise every day because she is fat.However she is fat or thin,I really love my friend.