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初中英语命题作文真题演练(95):素质教育

发布时间:2014-03-26 17:10浏览次数:2460
要求:

为了进一步实施素质教育,山东省所有初中学生都能享受到两天的周末自由时间。在这两天的时间里,有的学生走进图书馆、书店充实自己的知识;有的加入体育俱乐部,健身强体;有的积极参加社会实践活动;还有的在家帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务……你是怎么度过的?你对两天周末有何看法?请以Finally, Week Ends为题写一篇80词左右的文章。
提示:

1、素质教育quality education两天周末 two-day-weekend 充实,丰富enrich社会实践social practice 社会society

2、不要出现真实的人名和学校名。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

It's well-known that high school students have two-day-weekend to enjoy the entertainment they want. However, just like me, more and more children quit up their space time to enter into the training classes in various kinds. These classes occupy their all the two-day-weekend, which makes students not happy. For me, the two-day-weekend have nothing but to study. I can't go tripping and have shopping because I don't dare to waste my learning time too much. When my friends have found the jobs or goals, I just puzzle about my destination. I think it is wrong for me to ignore the social practice which may enrich my living experience. Above all, I must lift up my confidence and make up the decision in my mind. Participating in more activities will help me learn more.

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