2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowaday,more and more people like shopping on online.And it have being become a fashion in the socity.On online shopping have many advantagements give us, for example,it give us to bring many convernience ,we can't go to marking, open the conputer,you can choose your like goods. But it bring us to some unadvantage,for example ,it make more ang more people become lazy,they choose watch the computer whole a day.what is more,the shopping which we can only read the picture and don't tough.so we may be buy many bad goods.As far as i am concerned, i advise that if you have a spare time ,you can go to supermarking,because you can read ang tough really it and make you feel satisfied.