2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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with the booming of the economy,online shopping gains its popularity .It plays an important patr in our daily life .we can benefit a lot from it .in my opinion,online shopping is very convenient and efficient .all the thing we have to do is surf the internet and click the mouse .then we can get everything thae we want .how wonderful it is .online retailers can offer cut-throat because they don't have to bear the cost of running a physical shop .however.from another perspective ,online shopping has is own demerits.the quality of goods brought online can't be guaranteed.many people aren't famliar with online shopping so they may easily be cheated.it's quite dangerous for us .there is no doubt there online shopping has a bright feyure . but only when we have deeply understanding of online shopping,can we make fully ues of it .