2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

recently ,trust has attracted a great attention and sparked a hot discussion .some people think that trust is a key to have a deep exchange of thoughts and minds .keeping trust make us have more chances to listen to others and found a profound relationship with each other .however ,some people deem that having a conversation with others don't need too much trust because of our rapid life pace .no one can deny that most of us just want to get information that they want to know best as soon as possible ,because we are so busy that we have too less time to talk with others freely. actually , i firmly hold the former idea .whenever we are,whatever we do ,however we think ,trust is always a bridge that shorten our distance and make us know others more and have more deep friendship.trust is so important for us .we can't have all kinds of beautiful feeling without it .we can't have great ambition and produce great thoughts .we can't get though all difficulties on our own,if without trust ,how can we live in the world? i can't imagine that .so how amazing trust is ,isn't it ?