中考考前作文集中训练附范文20:网上交友

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I think make friends online is bad for us ,because it's not so safe.If we make friends online ,maybe we will have lots of trouble. For example,if you do not know the person who want meet you is bad or good,you will be danger.And the internet is not safer,many differert person in this,it can make us get different.Now,more and more people begin to enjoy making friends online,it's dangerous.So,we should have a good habit in internet,we can learn lots of kmowledge ,but it also have bad ways .