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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
As a student, we need think about lots of things, such as the food, clothes, shoes, something i want to buy. But all things are related to money. As a good daughter or son, we need to control of how many money we can spend. But as a customer,we should pay for the bill, and then push the economy in that way. We are student now, so we need to save our money. We are student, we had no time and skills to earn money, all of we used are our parents provide for us. When we have some food, we pay for it; we found a new clothes,and then pay for it. It just pay, no matter how much money is. In my opinion, we should hold on the speed the use of money, until we can afford it. Once we can afford for ourselves, we can do our effort to the society.
