托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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There is an old saying: Practice makes perfect, which is always used for encouraging others. It is also an experience form our ancestors. Perseverance practice one to be patient, smart, confident, and stronger at last. It is really hard to keep on doing the same thing no matter how many times you failure unless you are very patient. Without patience, Edison will not invent the electric lamp after trying thousands of materials for the filament. Perseverance makes you will not be easy to give up until you find the right result. When you repeat the same thing many times, it will be easier for you to find the key. For example, after enjoying the childhood with the apple tree year after year, Newton found out the Universal Gravitation when an apple fallen down as usual. On noticing the key, you will smarter next time when you come across teh same thing. Patient and smart are important characters to achieve the success. After you go though struggling time and get a small success, you will be encourged and confident. It is not only believing in yourself but also believed by others. Just in that case, you are a strong man totally. As the old saying, failure is the mother of success, perseverance lead you to success and make you stronger.