文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
My dear friend David Welcome to LANZHOU ,and i am very happy to knew you will learned Chinese .I think to learn Chinese is very difficult for the most of foreigner.but do not give up .Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance. I believe you will make it . Please allow us to offer the most sincere wishes! Your friend ChenQuan