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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

computer has been increasingly more important in the past few years in terms of the communication among many a lot of people.as you can know,to get more opportunities to live,study and work better,people always get apart from their hometowns,parents and friends.they miss one another so much sometimes.at that time,they can chat through the computer just like they never held so far distance . as far as i am concerned, electronic communication will never replace face-to-face contact.they are the same impact on communication among people though the two act by different ways.we needn't rely on computer to keep contact with people we love if it is likely to get together with them.remember you are the master of the computer .

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