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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33550
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Being a smart consumer If you have exposed yourself to the household quote ___"Money is not everything, but we can't live without money even one day.", your attention should be poured to the undeniable fact that money does play a significant role in contribution of people's enjoyment of life. Currently, a growing awareness of necessity to money has aroused the extensive social phenomenon that numerous people try their utmost to save money in all life expenses. Take daily consuming for example, it's typical for customers to collect coupons and make the best of them on essential occasions when they can be used. And also, a multitude of consumers have a good command of online shopping that they look for group-buy deals on the internet whenever or whatever they desire to do. Undoubtedly, it's an excellent approach that not only people can satisfy their own needs, but also get the thing in a more economic way, which costs them less on the commodities. What a win-win situation. As far as I'm concerned, I'm in favor of such a wise way. Honestly speaking, money makes a big difference in our realistic life. When talk about the money, people are always serious, and extremely mean, due to the fact that we can't live without money, and what's more critical is that money doesn't come easily. There are a rich variety of methods to acquire money, such as working in the governments. run one's own business. However, it's your persistent efforts that trigger your payments. As the well-known saying enlightens"production can never be faster than saving." In view of the truth that money derives from hard industriousness, what the contemporary do to save their is entirely reasonable and rational. In addition to above saving money through has become a world-wide ever-accelerated consuming claim that is becoming the subject as rooted in public consciousness as daily essentials. In a world, I'm totally stand by such a heated fashion, which will not only assist people in obtaining a more fruitful life, but also is conductive of our heritage of our brilliant traditional virtue.

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