小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is Tom.He is a boy and he likes math very much.so, he usually teaches my math.He is good at sports,so he is tall and thick.He is also handsome.Many girls love him.The teacher loves him,too.On the one hand,he is good with me. On the other hand,his mother wants me marry him.