2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Day after day ,computer become people best friend.We like to talk a lot friend online . We buy a lot things online .IF we love something in real life ,we can search it online .But we can get real life online.If we like to walk in a hot party,we must live computer alone. Because not everyone like life on online.