河南柘城县2012-2013学年第一学期期末质量检测八年级英语试卷英语作文

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I hate to do some chores．I don't like to sweep the floor．it's boring．I hate to take out the trash，because the dustbin smells terrible．But I like other chores,I like to wash the car，because I can be outside．I don't hate to do the dishes;it can let me have a rest．Also I like to cook．It will be happy after I finish a dish． In fact，we should do some chores at home．not only give parents a hand，but we can learn a lot from it．