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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4048
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题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分88.0分
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

What I have learned from my years at university? The household quote" University is a stage where you can completely develop yourself, university is a necessary step for your promising future." is quiet thought-provoking and aims to enlighten the contemporary students to make the best university as well as try your utmost to realize the original aim you set for yourself. Since such a well- known saying has become a subject as rooted in my consciousness as daily essentials, as for me, I take it as my motto, which reminds of the undeniable fact only when I grasp the opportunity of building up my comprehensive quality in university, can I acquire more qualification in the fierce future competition.And in deed, I really reap huge fruits that will contribute a lot to my later life. What I have acquired is too numerous to list, generally speaking, it can be depicted into two parts. Firstly, what pops crowds into mind first is that on the ground of my persistent efforts I spare in the academic filed as well as indomitable willpower devoted to other challenging scientific research, I think, I am able to be equal to some of the job requirements. It's a stable job that ensures your happiness. Undoubtedly, if your basic needs of life can not be satisfied first, it's worthless to talk about anything else. Therefore , have a good command of professional knowledge can lay a solid foundation for your future. Secondly, another is also noteworthy is the personal ability I have accumulated during my daily work and other additional jobs. In the last few years, I took an active part in a rich variety activities, although I may not get the admirable results, such cherished life lessons I experienced indirect me how to lead my life in the following time. Actually, I grow up in this tough but meaningful profess. In my spare time, I took the unshakable duty of the role I chose in student union. Not only I can schedule my time and order appropriately, but also I developed my personal quality, such as action to face the emergency, how to organize a activity entirely. Anyway, all of these I have mentioned above are from my years life in college, which can never be seize outside the college. To sum up, I value my university life most. Saying without going, it will make a big difference in my future.

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