高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport Playing football is my favorite sport .I fall in love it by chance .ONE day on my way to home ,i saw a football,then i picked it up ,i play it with my firends I often train and race with my firends MY favorite football star is Back ham . My biggset wish is becaming a professional football player.