2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

With the improvement of technology and economy,the mobile phone has increasing more functions in the past few years.You can not only call and send messages,but you can also do more things by using a phone especially when connected with the Internet,such as guiding to someplace you want ,listening to the latest music,watching movies,sharing enjoyments with your friends and families and so on.Apart from these,it is very convenient for you to download some applies to help you with your study and work.when you are tired,you can relax yourself too. However,it is because it brings so many conveniences to people's life that some of them overuse phones too much.Phones just become the master of them.people always are looking at their phones whatever they are doing ,despite of the fact that they are dangerous or out of right place. As far as i am concerned,people should be conscious to use their phones.Only in this way,can you gain more benefits.