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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2450
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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The benefits of volunteering According to the latest research released on www.Sohu. com, volunteering has aroused extensive concern of the whole society, which demonstrates an undeniable fact that a multitude of people from all levels intend to make contributions to the society through such a constructive way.Most of them, who have take an active part in volunteering activities have reaped huge fruits. From my point of view, I certainly stand by this point. Living in a mutual society, not only should we pursue our own dreaming goals, but also try our utmost to play a significant role in the society. Take volunteering for example, some people may say that it's waste of time helping others, otherwise, you can spare the time to do your personal things as much as possible, which seems more conductive to yourself. Nevertheless, what they fail to recognize is that help others in need is also help yourself. When you are engaged in volunteer works, you can learn numerous things from others or this process, undoubtedly which can never be acquired from other professions, such as spirit of donation, value of cooperation and most important of all extensive love to others. Only you really experience the hardships of other life, and spare your effort to assist them in achieving life's happiness, can you cherish what you have possessed now, and become more merciful to the weak lives around you. To sum up, to live is not just live alone. we humans inevitably are connected with each other. In attempt to live in a more harmonious surroundings, joint efforts and mutual love is absolutely required. And what stimulate it? It's volunteering that make a big difference.

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