2007年湖南高考测试题写作范文：安排大学生活

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The things will do in my new comple's life can be listed as follow: First,inot only do i make my new study gold,but olso i will corelt the way to study .What's moer,i want to depengden for study by my myshely.So on,i will take pake of uot activitive .Last,i will get well on with my friends!