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The impact of information explosion Living in an era that technology and science develop at a ever-accelerated speed, people are more accessible to acquire a multitude of latest information. What a worthwhile fortune, compared with the generations before, it's definitely impossible for them to be exposed to the information in such a convenient and direct way. Your exposure to the modern mass media, must make you familiar with the updating news everyday, which reminds of the undeniable fact that it's these explosive information that assists us in keeping pace with the world's development. Only when we command a good grasp of information from all aspects of our life, can we advance our work more efficiently. In my opinion, a rich variety of information not only enlarge our scope of knowledge, but also make contributions to the formation of ideal thinking frame. Nevertheless, we can't fail to acknowledge the urgent tendency that quiet a few irrelevant information distracts our daily life and normal work. According to the research released on the professional newspaper recently, there are more than half of the Internet market involves rubbish___ worthless information, including bothering advertisements, unhealthy pictures or videos. Undoubtedly, they will do immeasurable harm to our health, both physical and mental. To make situation worse, some of the them are opened to the public without the owner's permission, which in essence has invaded others private rights as well as the readers, who may hurt others in a indirect method. Therefore, from my perspective, when talk about the impacts of the approaching of information era, we might as well adopt a n objective attitude. Take the essence and discard the dregs seems more wise and rational. Only in this way, can we make the best of this social great presents___utilize to the full its favorable conditions.
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