2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；注意文中个别的句子错误；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

Nowadays there are more and more products,they have beautiful packages,at the same time,they are practical.But there were also have many unsatisfying goods,one of the representative phenomenons is over packaging. Over packaging is common in our lives,I think there are these reasons of over packaging:firstly,manufacturers are willing to sell their goods,for goods,the packaging is necessary,so they have a wrong idea:better packaging make better sales volume;secondly,customers buy goods resting with packaging,this action may facilitate over packing;thirdly,the society don't clearly define the issue of over packaging. I disagree the action of over packing,I think goods'quality is more important,and over packaging would cause waste.To check over packing,I think it need manufacturers,customers and society work together.