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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12876
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the development of internet, more and more people, especially young people, prefer electronic communication to pace-to-face contact. Those people who like to communicate on the internet focus on the cell phone and neglect the people standing around them fully. So, there is an interesting phenomenon appeared that all the people play his own cell phone in the party. There are three reasons can account for this phenomenon. Firstly, talking on the internet, such as cell phone, is a good way to save time. He can start or stop the talking by his own mind. Secondly, interesting picture or movie providing by internet may increase the fun of communication. Finally, more and more work and study conducted by computer and cell phone, and thus people may be indicated to this tool.

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