小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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When I grow up,I want to be a teacher.I like children very much.When I play game with them,I feel very happy.Most about them are very cute.They often talk with smile.Some times,they can cry,but after five minutes ,they are fine.I teaches them music.I like music very much.My voice is better.I am good at singing.