2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误；请注意分段。

ever children giong to independent earily or late,and parents ,responsible for theach it to their children.but nowadays so many parents do everything which his chilren needs to do,that is a problem and they will regret for it at least. for independent, you should allow your chilren help himself to his needs to do, just seeing act and theach chilren how to do it right, do not worry about making mistake, because everyone learning in mistake,