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People often have a disagreement when treating foreign adoptions. For Americans looking to adopt children, China has long been a popular foreign source. Last year, Americans adopted nearly 6,500 Chinese children. Indeed, most people support that American adoption of Chinese orphans. However, a few people strongly disagree with American adoption. And they expressed their worry that these children who are adopted by American will lose their aspects of Chinese culture. While these views have some credibility, they aren't completely true. To comprehensively think about the consequence of being exposed to different culture, Americans should be allowed to adopt Chinese orphans. It is often claimed that Chinese orphans who are adopted by Americans would lose their own culture when they grow up in Western culture. Opponents of Americans who want to adopt Chinese children claimed that these orphans will grow up to lose their comprehension of Chinese culture. Many grown-up Chinese Americans are not pretty understood Chinese culture because their adoptive parents speak English and don’t know about Chinese culture well. And they grow up in the American culture and get the American education, their ways of thinking and values are completely different. Admittedly, there is some truth to this argument. However, not every Chinese orphan who was adopted by Americans negatively affected by the experience. Jenna Cook is a convincing example. As a sophomore student at Yale University, it is the fifth time Jenna has come to Wuhan to work as a social welfare volunteer along with her adoptive mother Margaret Cook. Margaret Cook is an American primary school teacher who adopted Jenna twenty years ago and never hid from her the fact she was adopted. As Jenna growing up, she helped her explore her Chinese heritage. In spite of having trips to experience the Chinese culture, Jenna also learned Chinese at school, learned how to use chopsticks and even some traditional dances. In addition, Jenna had made many friends with her Chinese-American neighbors. To her way of thinking, Jenna explained that more than half of American families who have adopted Chinese children want their children to have a good understanding of their birth country and to keep aspects of Chinese culture. In this case, we can learn that living in different culture exactly gave her a special perspective to learn and have a comprehensive understanding of Chinese culture. Adopted by Americans do not mean keeping these children away from Chinese culture, Americans should be allowed to adopt Chinese orphans. A child who was brought up and taught properly by American parents shows that these children would learn and understand better about Chinese culture instead of losing it. Americans who want to adopt Chinese orphans are definitely aware of their responsibilities.
