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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5945
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;能够使用一些不错的从句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Nowadays, there exist a hot topic, living in a rural place and living a city, which is better? People always hold the different ideas. As to me, I really have no idea that which is better, I think different place has different advantages. I am a country girl and I grow up in the countryside, where is a rural place. Compared with the city, I have less friends and I almost have no chance to shopping or take part in some active groups. But I have lots of opportunities to get close to the nature, lots of trees, mountains and animals, of course, I got some friends when I went to school. In addition, the fresh air and green food are the best things the city people desired. However, years later, I went to college, this is the first time I stepped into a city, there were so many cars, so many humans and so many buildings, I could not believe that. I can go around the city by bus which I can not imagine when I was in the countryside,that's so different. I can buy almost everything if I have money and I can get everything if I want. The two kinds of life is totally different, I can not say which one is better, I love both. These experiences are great during my life.

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