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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33527
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In recent years, China's aging problem is at unprecedented levels. The aging population has become the major character during the development of people in 21 century. The rapid aging of people's structure and the life quality in their late years is getting to be the main issue in modern society of China. However, now China is experiencing the economic transformation period, all kinds of social security and welfare system is not sound enough, and at this time, aging has reached a peak. In a sense, all this brings pressure to the society. There are also many problems towards Chinese old people. First, remain elderly in rural areas. Nowadays, with the development of urbanization, an increasing number of young adults in rural areas are going out to work, as a consequence, in the countryside, more and more left-behind elderly people appear. Usually, they have no one to company, only in Chinese Spring Festival will they come back for a short time, nevertheless, from coming back to leaving they are busy. Sometimes, despite that they are free, most of them will choose to play cards with friends or chat with friends. Second, elderly people in city In city, there are a lot of lonely old men. Some of them live in nursing home, or social welfare home. And some live with sons or daughters, they seldom feel happy. Reason for this phenomenon is that people living in city are under great pressure, they have to work, take care of their children and parents, and some need undertake house loan. After they come back from work, they are too tired to company with parents and communicate with them. Third, “Lost alone” “Lost alone” people refer to those whose only son or daughter passes away unfortunately, they cannot expect their children to visit them often. Now, they are growing older, but no one can provide them.

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