2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

作者词汇基本功很好，学术词汇表达也比较恰当；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In recent years, China's aging problem is at unprecedented levels. The aging population has become the major character during the development of people in 21 century. The rapid aging of people's structure and the life quality in their late years is getting to be the main issue in modern society of China. However, now China is experiencing the economic transformation period, all kinds of social security and welfare system is not sound enough, and at this time, aging has reached a peak. In a sense, all this brings pressure to the society. There are also many kinds of old people in China. First, remain elderly in rural areas. Nowadays, with the development of urbanization, an increasing number of young adults in rural areas are going out to work, as a consequence, in the countryside, more and more left-behind elderly people appear. Usually, they have no one to company, only in Chinese Spring Festival will they come back for a short time, nevertheless, from coming back to leaving they are busy. Sometimes, despite that they are free, most of them will choose to play cards with friends or chat with friends. Second, elderly people in city In city, there are a lot of lonely old men. Some of them live in nursing home, or social welfare home. And some live with sons or daughters, they seldom feel happy. Reason for this phenomenon is that people living in cities are under great pressure, they have to work, take care of their children and parents, and some need undertake house loan. After they come back from work, they are too tired to accompany their parents and communicate with them. Third, “Lost alone” “Lost alone” people refer to those whose only son or daughter passes away unfortunately, they cannot expect their children to visit them often. Now, they are growing older, but no one can provide them. What problems do old people have to face? First, every day, the aged live in empty nest, and they feel isolated and cut off from the rest of the world. Most of the time, they have strong desire to talk with their children but because of the deepening generation gap they do not know how to get along with their children. Second, with the increasing of age, a group number of the aged are inevitable to be diagnosed with high blood pressure, heart disease, or costive. The aged is eaten up with aged diseases. What can we do to solve these problems? With the constant improvement of the elderly population, and great increasing in absolute number of elderly people, it is far from to make the old security system to adapt to the market economic condition of their living needs and particularly urgent to solve a whole series of social problems of the elderly people. Government: First, government needs to establish social security system and perfect Medicare system in order to make sure that everyone has access to hospital. Second, government can also provide the aged or young adults with employment opportunities. Not only the aged can have things to do, but also their children can work in hometown and take care of their parents. Third, in district or community, entertainment and fitness facilities can be built for the old to take exercises. Also, making community clinics available is an ideal solution. Children: The parents do not only need children’s money, but also they want their children to accompany them more and share interesting things with them. As a son or daughter, in our spare time, we should stay with our parents more, or take them to travel every year. The aged: The aged should adjust their attitude toward life. When their children are busy, they can play with their friends or neighborhood, like dancing, playing chess, or chatting. For example, my grandfather, every morning, he plays gate ball with his team, after lunch, he rides his bike to go fishing, and in the evening, he plays cards with my grandmother. No matter how busy are my parents, my grandfather keeps a good mood every day.