作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Should private car owners taxed for pollution? According to the recent research released on Daily's Newspaper, thanks to the dramatic updating of technology, our vehicle industry is developing at a spectacular speed. To some degree, increasing production and improved quality of the fancy cars, more and more people possess their own cars or are going to have a private one. Such a phenomenon leads to the frequent occurrence of traffic congestion, to make matter worse, our living surroundings is face the great threat, which will cause irreparable harm to human's health. Therefore, how should we tackle the problem has aroused the extensive concern of the public. Where there is an issue, there is a way. In view of such a serious condition, some governments especially in big cities, have made a decision some related polluted taxes in attempt to curb the use of private cars and its unexpected consuming. While, most of the car owners are absolutely against this proposal, according to the, it will raise the financial burden as well as make them inconvenient to drive car as free as before under the pressure of the pollution tax. However, there are still a multitude of citizens support the notion, the reason lies the fact that health ought to be put into the first place. The unlimited use of cars is bound to pose harm to them. As far as I'm concerned, I totally stand by the latter opinion. It's no denying that cars plays a significant role in contribution to people's enjoyable life. But what we can't fail to recognize is that the emission of greenhouse gases and other rubbish as well as the number of traffic accidents results from cars congestion are becoming to our potential dangers. I think, pollution tax on car owners can not only make a continuous difference to our life, but also facilitate our health career. To sum up, it's a good combination that we can acquire convenience from cars, and at the same time follow the world pace of environmental protection. Apparently, powerful affection should be devoted to in.
人气:241发布:2013-05-18
人气:76发布:2015-01-26
人气:18发布:2017-03-19