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山东临沂市临沭县2013届高三下学期模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:30浏览次数:1168
要求:

如何利用课间10分钟?有些高中学生课间依旧在教室认真学习(如图1),也有些高中学生走出教室积极活动(如图2)。请根据下面两幅图片用英文写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 简要描述图片;
2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想: 你更喜欢哪一种方式?简述理由(至少两点)。

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注意:

1. 对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数120左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshed in body and
mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently. Students in class
are usually looking forward to the break.

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshed in body and mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently. Students in class are usually looking forward to the break. But in high school,things become different , most students spend the ten minutes between the classes doing their homework or revising the knowledge that they learnt just now.They try their best to put all attention and energy on their study ,hoping get a good greats eventually.It seems that they buried themselves in the ocean of books . On the contrary ,some students are still appealed to the breaks.They go out of the classroom and play football with other classmates .They are running and laughing loudly.They find their happiness between the classes . As far as i am concerned ,students are supposed to go out of the classroom and have a rest.Because it can make their mind clearer so that they wound feel less tired .It is good for their next class.Setting in the class and study all day not only is bad for their eyes but also bad for their studies.

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